Putting the pieces together

I have been honnestly working on this research paper all day. I have finish a draft but it is in dying need of revision. My biggest problem is organising everything so that it flows well. These are some of my topics that will be covered....giving you a glimpse as to what to expect in the oral presentation. Just a reminder i am reviewing a book length ethnography about online social networking sites

• What the campfire means to Ryan
• Her argument in the thesis
• making judgments about others by observation
• Why Ryan is interested in studying social networks
• A brief history about Facebook, MySpace and Tribe
• private vs public
• online shrines
• identity online
• other studies on social networking sites reviewed by Ryan
• what is a "friend"
• stalking online
• addiction